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pessimism at large

by Rachelle Howe

snip.

time for a cut, time
for these shaggy bangs to
exit stage right.
time for these eyes to adjust,
though the spotlight has been
getting in the way for centuries.

i may be an old soul,
but that makes me no less youthful.
i might pop pills to get my energy,
but being a drug addict isn't as easy
as it looks.

see? you actually swallowed that.

maybe you should take a closer look,
and not take me at face value.
there's nothing of value to take,
after all.
and maybe this world will all fall away,
maybe it'll be cut,
maybe
with the last diamond shreds of innocence.

10/04/2003

Author's Note: i have no idea what this is, or what to make of it. i might edit later. it feels choppy and incomplete. and too many maybes. O.o

Posted on 10/05/2003
Copyright © 2024 Rachelle Howe

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristine Briese on 10/05/03 at 02:48 AM

Too many maybes? That's just how life is. I love the "diamond shreds of innocence" image. Beautiful as always.

Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 10/05/03 at 10:40 PM

*gulp*, sooo many similarities.... (the old soul thing...) beautiful piece, "with the last diamond shreds of innocence" *drools* you are superb.

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