Am i brAve? by Kalikala SmithFaceless I am real
Standing in a crowd I feel nothing
Wind crashes down
makes my limbs move
but the motion
is the trigger
pulled by my lack of motivation
and I quiver
anticipation of this pace
change
am I brave? 10/04/2003 Posted on 10/04/2003 Copyright © 2024 Kalikala Smith
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/04/03 at 03:54 PM Brave to be part of the crowd or to be on the verge of breaking from it and being uncertain. Great verse that forces thought on the reader. |
Posted by Christel Crews on 10/05/03 at 06:13 AM amazing piece! i am captivated by it |
Posted by John Harder on 10/05/03 at 06:48 AM i feel the confusion in here. nicely worded. |
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