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Am i brAve?

by Kalikala Smith

Faceless I am real
Standing in a crowd I feel nothing
Wind crashes down
makes my limbs move
but the motion
is the trigger
pulled by my lack of motivation
and I quiver
anticipation of this pace
change
am I brave?

10/04/2003

Posted on 10/04/2003
Copyright © 2024 Kalikala Smith

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/04/03 at 03:54 PM

Brave to be part of the crowd or to be on the verge of breaking from it and being uncertain. Great verse that forces thought on the reader.

Posted by Christel Crews on 10/05/03 at 06:13 AM

amazing piece! i am captivated by it

Posted by John Harder on 10/05/03 at 06:48 AM

i feel the confusion in here. nicely worded.

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