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dancing with death
by Michele Schottelkorbthere once was a fairly odd girl
her life; a precarious twirl
till one day she died
the angels; they cried
but continue, she did, to whirl 10/04/2003 Author's Note: a limerick
Posted on 10/04/2003
Copyright © 2024 Michele Schottelkorb
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/04/03 at 02:37 PM Living without living. The process of life and death walks hand in hand. It all depends on us as to how we live. A brilliant limerick |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/04/03 at 03:21 PM Goin' through the motions --with style! Great verse with wit and wisdom rolled into one. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/06/03 at 12:54 AM Sarah, I opt for your interpretation.
Well written. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 10/07/03 at 07:35 PM Wonderful use of a limerick. In the carefree afterlife she gets to whirl away enjoying herself, unlike the danger when she lived. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 10/08/03 at 01:53 AM This is a nicely turned limerick, Michele. One can only wonder if she was perhaps a dervish.
Peace... |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/01/04 at 04:00 AM clever but with depth. #2 read for me (of your poetry) and you get one more vote in my heart - adore (checked yes) |
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