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abecedarian for the realist
by Michele Schottelkorbable bodies create dedicated earnings
for greater human initiative
just knowledge lends meaningful notes of perseverance
quintessential reality shines through!
unless...
villainous wrenches x-radiate your zealousness 10/03/2003 Author's Note: ok, several comments to me were that these guys are addictive... lololol... ok, i'm hooked...
Posted on 10/03/2003
Copyright © 2024 Michele Schottelkorb
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 10/03/03 at 03:20 PM I like this one because it uses each word in a meaningful way. A lot of times, Abecedarians sound a little bit like "I threw this word in because I needed to use up the letter, and it plays no meaningful part in the poem" But yours really utilizes each word well :) |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/03/03 at 08:25 PM Now ain't that a mouthful! Clever with the abc's! |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/04/03 at 02:47 PM Creating a piece, subtle and meaningful, and a clear message, with self imposed boundaries is commendable.Its a crafty creation. |
| Posted by Amanda L Marron on 10/04/03 at 03:36 PM great abecedarian!!! |
| Posted by Cole Miller on 10/09/03 at 03:15 PM way to go! its always so limiting working in this form, but you pushed those limits and made a marvelous piece of writing. |
| Posted by Melinda Sordino on 12/31/03 at 08:14 PM beautiful! i too am hooked on them. this is great-it uses each letter in such form...AND it makes sense (a hard thing to do!) |
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