I like this one because it uses each word in a meaningful way. A lot of times, Abecedarians sound a little bit like "I threw this word in because I needed to use up the letter, and it plays no meaningful part in the poem" But yours really utilizes each word well :)

Now ain't that a mouthful! Clever with the abc's!

Creating a piece, subtle and meaningful, and a clear message, with self imposed boundaries is commendable.Its a crafty creation.

way to go! its always so limiting working in this form, but you pushed those limits and made a marvelous piece of writing.

beautiful! i too am hooked on them. this is great-it uses each letter in such form...AND it makes sense (a hard thing to do!)