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abecedarian for the realist

by Michele Schottelkorb

able bodies create dedicated earnings
for greater human initiative
just knowledge lends meaningful notes of perseverance
quintessential reality shines through!
villainous wrenches x-radiate your zealousness


Author's Note: ok, several comments to me were that these guys are addictive... lololol... ok, i'm hooked...

Posted on 10/03/2003
Copyright © 2022 Michele Schottelkorb

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 10/03/03 at 03:20 PM

I like this one because it uses each word in a meaningful way. A lot of times, Abecedarians sound a little bit like "I threw this word in because I needed to use up the letter, and it plays no meaningful part in the poem" But yours really utilizes each word well :)

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/03/03 at 08:25 PM

Now ain't that a mouthful! Clever with the abc's!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/04/03 at 02:47 PM

Creating a piece, subtle and meaningful, and a clear message, with self imposed boundaries is commendable.Its a crafty creation.

Posted by Amanda L Marron on 10/04/03 at 03:36 PM

great abecedarian!!!

Posted by Cole Miller on 10/09/03 at 03:15 PM

way to go! its always so limiting working in this form, but you pushed those limits and made a marvelous piece of writing.

Posted by Melinda Sordino on 12/31/03 at 08:14 PM

beautiful! i too am hooked on them. this is great-it uses each letter in such form...AND it makes sense (a hard thing to do!)

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