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!EXPLICIT! this poem contains bad, bad words.
by Jolie JordanIt's pure intensity.
{scattered with negative words
and the occasional fuckscene..}
He says everything you want to,
but could never put it into context.
you evaluate
then censor.
your analysis is jaded.
..and this is accurate?
"what if John read this..?
..what if Jane came across this?"
(See, the truth is
John's fucking Jane.
and Jane likes it.
Alot.)
Cherry lips wrap around the nicotine killer,
sucking the life out of something so vague.
"haven't you seen the TRUTH commercials?"
What is truth anyways
when you ban the vibrant
and the shopworn dullfucks flow
like the blood from their deadening slit-throats.
And the title read..
"this contains naughty words and vivid mentionings of s-e-x!"
You make it so easy.
now all John & Jane have to look for
is that what is labeled in
big bold letters:
"Explicit." 09/30/2003 Author's Note: Lets see if anyone can guess what/who this is about..
Posted on 09/30/2003
Copyright © 2024 Jolie Jordan
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/02/03 at 05:32 AM Words are neither good or bad. The meaning and the 'feeling' attached depends on the word experience and the association. What sounds beautiful in a given situation between John and Jane might sound ugly between Jane and Kane. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 10/03/03 at 03:34 AM brilliant |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 12/02/03 at 06:29 AM (See, the truth is
John's $#%@ing Jane.
and Jane likes it.
Alot.)
....now that gavin's changed the explicit feature, this is fun to read!!! |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/02/03 at 03:24 PM Tasty little piece. The truth is most everyone wants, but no one wants to admit they want due to social pressure. Kinda makes it more exciting when you break the rules.. doncha think? Great read. |
| Posted by Anne Boulender on 07/16/06 at 11:19 PM i can't guess, but at least its interesting. |
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