| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 09/29/03 at 11:14 PM Absolutely, vividly gorgeous! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/30/03 at 12:07 AM Oh... yes! Yes! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/30/03 at 08:47 PM Clever comparison of deciduous and conifers! Those leaves will soon be turning bright yellows, reds, oranges, and golds, and mixed colors. With all of the rain they should be spectacular this year! |
| Posted by Stephanie Kent on 10/01/03 at 03:19 AM I just love this...the irony is great:) Exceptional! |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/01/03 at 03:37 AM Subtle, the SCENE and the layer from which it was SEEN. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/01/03 at 06:30 PM They envy the colors, but not the eventual demise, I bet. Great verse that is very ingenious! |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 10/01/03 at 09:17 PM I liked the last line especially :) |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 10/02/03 at 12:50 PM EXCELLENT... i'm not a big haiku fan (i know, i'm rare), but this is perfect... what a beautiful small piece of life... blessings :) |
| Posted by Brian Francis on 10/02/03 at 11:19 PM Well said. I miss the seasons (the desert just don't beleive in them), so thanks for bringing fall to me so vividly.
-bf |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 10/16/03 at 03:38 AM A perfect haiku. Gorgeous. |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 11/13/03 at 10:28 PM Wonderful haiku :-) |
