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Plucked petals madly
by Mainon A Schwartzplucked petals madly--
the bloodscatter shift and through
cracked gravity, float, crash, explode
yet tenderfall to dust
disheveled glances torn--
drenching cornerscotch and atmosphere
backache, pinksqueeze, undertwine
and featherwall for lust
excruciate dipped lashes --
collective flashing black, react
smack defensed, lost glimmergloss
and hungerstall-- we must.
09/29/2003 Author's Note: an experiment in passion-- reactions welcome.
Posted on 09/29/2003
Copyright © 2024 Mainon A Schwartz
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 09/30/03 at 02:43 PM O.O .... i'm... not sure what i think of this. LoL my brain won't wrap around it yet. lemme get back to you. |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/06/03 at 05:19 PM this reminds me of two strangers having instant chemistry and staring each other down. (down, down down...) *tilts her head again.* i see her blinking first. perhaps. i like this. the rhyme is subtle, and i like the desperation in the last line. |
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