a pause for humor. you communists. by Rachelle Howeyou are a mannequin.
your eyes drone inward and skyward,
the holes drilled into sockets, impurity.
i have been thrust in you.
i have been muted again.
you walk me, a dog.
i bite your ankles, you yelp.
(life has a funny irony when it's
kicking you in the ass.) 09/26/2003 Author's Note: *DIES LAUGHING* WHAT THE FUCK!? this started as a topic challenge by Krista Brock and ended up being very much not anything.
Posted on 09/26/2003 Copyright © 2024 Rachelle Howe
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Jason Wardell on 09/26/03 at 08:37 AM ha! i love those last two lines. way to stray off-topic ;) |
Posted by Kristine Briese on 09/26/03 at 12:00 PM *laughing* I agree; those last two lines are priceless! |
Posted by Ginette T Belle on 09/26/03 at 04:17 PM I LOVE IT! you so rock... |
Posted by Jolie Jordan on 09/26/03 at 06:04 PM I don't understand.. but I like it. lol |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/27/03 at 03:37 AM 'life has a funny irony'...yes, you start at something and end up doing something else. You resolve to do something and end up doing just the opposite |
Posted by Dana E Brossard on 12/05/03 at 12:50 PM **chuckles** Very nice |
Posted by Indigo Tempesta on 02/18/05 at 02:22 AM intended or not, this has a lovely sence of shrugging shoulders in the face of utter despair. congratulations. or maybe i've just been watching too much "hedwig and the angry inch." |
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