exactly. not only do i agree, but your poem is mechanically fine. i love 'bimbo words', so descriptive of so many of the potd entrys. most of them, i dont even get past the first two lines....

hmmm...i was just having that conversation with someone else who agrees the other day.

Ah... you don't know how much I love this. I use to like all that "pretty" stuff that made no sense, but then again I was young.. and didn't really know much about anything. and now.. I just want to feel something when I read someones writing. I want to feel it, that they felt when writing. or something like that;) anyway, this is going on my faves.

very well put...interesting, unique perspective

Amen. Gutsy poem and well stated.

interesting thought, reminiscent of a conversation that we had [and got into something of a mess for] in the new beat forum a few weeks ago. my thoughts are: a) it's interesting, and perhaps useless, to speculate on whether a poem means anything to anybody... b) i think this poem could use a lot more in the way of images to tell, rather than telling itself. maybe get rid of some of the filler words [mainly 'and's] and much of the abstract language [like "inner-meaning.] but, as has been said, provocative and interesting. thanks for sharing, dear!

OMG @ bimbo words. That's so true it hurts.

mm. well done. most of the time i don't bother reading them, i'm afraid. no doubt there are people who feel similarly about my work, but. i know they were real when i wrote them.