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Aurora
by Trisha De GraciaAurora,
bold colour drifts,
evening flies great hues,
indifferent, juxtaposing,
kaleidoscoped,
lungeing 'midst night's opulent
presentation.
Quite remarkable, such true
unadulterated vision,
wonderous xenochromatics
- yonder zenith.
09/19/2003 Author's Note: My first abecedarian... I feel like a new mom :D
Posted on 09/19/2003
Copyright © 2024 Trisha De Gracia
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Barbara Griffith on 09/20/03 at 04:01 PM This style suits you Trish. You seem more able to get out what you're saying (?) in form. |
| Posted by J. P. Davies on 12/04/03 at 09:24 AM Hurray for POTD!! Trish you are too talented for words...oh and 1 L0\/3 U!! |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/04/03 at 01:46 PM what a beautiful and well done abecedarian... congratulations, you deserve it!... blessings :) |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 12/04/03 at 03:19 PM YES. that's my girl!! YES. |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/04/03 at 04:16 PM Excellent! Abecedarians can be difficult because meaning is sacrificed for form, but this one...wow! Outstanding! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/05/03 at 01:41 AM Remarkable! Congratulations on POTD! |
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