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Spaceship Eye

by Bruce W Niedt

For weeks I have marveled at Mars,

the closest itÂ’s been in eons,

climbing the southern sky,

bright, orange, unblinking.

 

It was so impressive on moonless nights,

that when the moon moved into its quarter,

I feared it would detract from the spectacle.

Instead, the view gives me goose bumps.

 

Here we have two heavenly spheres,

one close, one more distant, reflecting

the same sunlight that blazes their faces

and rebounds back to us.

 

As I gaze up, I can almost see

the depth of space:

looking out past the moon, past Mars and beyond,

my eye unimpeded by horizons.

09/09/2003

Author's Note: [My second poem about the Mars phenomenon - sorry if I'm getting repititious!]

Posted on 09/09/2003
Copyright © 2026 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by David R Spellman on 09/10/03 at 07:47 PM

Have been marvelling at them both these past few nights as the moon grows fuller. Well said Bruce.

Posted by JD Clay on 09/10/03 at 09:09 PM

I too was awestruck by the alignment, Bruce. Dimensional comparison presented on an earthly plane in your spectacular piece. Peace...

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