| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Brian Francis on 09/06/03 at 12:59 AM Neat one David.
-bf |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 09/06/03 at 02:55 AM lolol.... how clever! Well done! A feast for my eyes! |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/08/03 at 06:58 PM Very palpable verse that brings the reader a harvest of good reading! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 09/08/03 at 07:06 PM A multidimentional haiku, Dave. That and a little black pepper and we're set for lunch.
Peace... |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/10/03 at 02:37 AM Gardens treasures do bring pleasures. Good one
Dave.....Charlie |
| Posted by Kimberly Bare on 09/11/03 at 03:52 PM Really like the way you conveyed this message!
ingenious... |
