Rapture's Ride

by Kimberly Bare

Languid movements set the pace
Joyous smile upon the face

Thickness wrapped in silken flesh
Pulses quicken from sweet caress

Flickering moistness creates a need
Tantalizingly taken to the edge of sanity

Engulfing the senses without greed
Floating back to reality

Oh, the ebb and flow of tide
Does not compare to rapture's ride


Posted on 09/04/2003
Copyright © 2022 Kimberly Bare

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/05/03 at 03:40 PM

Nice flow. i like the way the structure accentuates the content. The stanzas feel like waves of images crashing into the readers mind. Great work.

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