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at play (a haiku)
by Kimberly Barecatching a glimpse of
playful feet running through streets
vicarious joy 09/01/2003 Author's Note: This is my first ever attempt at a haiku and I would truly appreciate any opinions or thoughts you may have....
Posted on 09/04/2003
Copyright © 2024 Kimberly Bare
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Cole Miller on 09/04/03 at 08:50 PM i think this is grand for a first attempt!! and i agree with sarah, it does paint a wonderful picture. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/09/03 at 07:34 PM I see the pitter patter of carefree little feet that laugh and giggle and the memories of when I used to be that way. I also feel an emotion of both happiness for the carefree with a tinge of jealousy. Great verse. |
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