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Just Another Candle

by Charles J Hannan

Dusty roads turn Autumn
Along a patch of cattails
Blowing softly in the breeze
Telltale signs of another beginning
Of another ending

Summer's fading into the west
As the hummingbirds dart at each other
Like tiny airplanes dogfighting
And a lone crysalis
Dangling by thread
Marks the last of the September colors

The purple cone flowers are nothing more
Than food for the wanting gold finches
And the cooling rains will soon appear
Washing away another year

A little sad to see it disappear
With old man winter hobbling
Just around the corner
Taking away my colorful life
And leaving me with just another candle
In my cake

09/04/2003

Posted on 09/04/2003
Copyright © 2025 Charles J Hannan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 09/04/03 at 05:18 AM

now now ...are we feeling old already??? LOL I really like this vivid picture of autumn though. So easy to see it and feel it. It's such a lovely season!!

Posted by Kristine Briese on 09/04/03 at 04:30 PM

Such a well-presented depiction of time passing!

Posted by Vimal Rony on 09/04/03 at 11:23 PM

The last stanza is too good.

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