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Tears
by Amy NiggelThey fall again tonight
as they have before
a fallen friend
a lost companion
life extinguished too early
now a black hole lies
where once your star burned
I can't help but wonder
will my tears calm the smoke 09/02/2003 Posted on 09/03/2003
Copyright © 2025 Amy Niggel
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| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 09/03/03 at 03:23 PM YES, this is a mature piece, i love it's simplicity
a black hole lies -- wonderful sound in this line,
will my tears calm the smoke - good imagery -- do this more!! |
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