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Nicotine Kisses

by Philippa Jane

She recalls
        all of the long
        nights spent wearing
        leopard print and
        sporting jeans to
        tuck in the tummy but
        adequately hide the
        war wounds
with a sigh.

(The nights when she
would attempt to
appear as a vision
        in charcoal greys
        and off-black
        frills and trails
leaving a contorted
fingerprint across jaded
surfaces and cramped
crawling space.)


Yet she always imagined
        her frame would remain a
        sweeter scent if she
        allowed the nicotine-filled
        smoke to surround her,
        creeping into her corners
        and lingering as a lasting
        reminder of
the imposter residing within.

09/01/2003

Author's Note: This is a reworking of a poem I wrote in September of 2002.. but I'm still not sure if I'm (or ever will be) completely happy with it.

Posted on 09/01/2003
Copyright © 2026 Philippa Jane

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Karen Michelle on 09/02/03 at 03:11 AM

i think i know her. You just get better and better each day.

Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 09/04/03 at 12:55 AM

creeping into her corners - great line a fantastic portrait of women everywhere.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/10/03 at 03:23 AM

I like it. The allusions and secrecy are quite stunning in this verse. Great read.

Posted by Ava Blu on 06/18/05 at 05:05 AM

Wow, you should be happy with it.

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