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all in a day's dream
by Olivia Weinkeinthe hesitant manner in which he breathes.
my god, i've seen heaven but it's never where
you expect it to be. so i closed that door &
moved on. you would have wanted me to, i know. 08/24/2003 Posted on 08/25/2003
Copyright © 2024 Olivia Weinkein
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/27/03 at 01:47 AM That ending is unforgettable. You have an intriguing attitude that is conveyed very well in verse. |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/22/08 at 02:24 PM every time i read another one of your poems, i am rocked back on my heels. and i remember why i added you as a friend. this is going on my favorites. |
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