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O

by Patricia J Reed

like a massive rock
dropped in serene waters
i ripple and shudder
through blinding depths of pleasure
brief utterances escaping
like the splashing down below
holding on for dear life
and slipping into heaven
where the angels sing
'oh god'
and he knows i'm coming
for i lay still
pink cheeked
and gasping for air

08/20/2003

Posted on 08/21/2003
Copyright © 2024 Patricia J Reed

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/23/03 at 07:59 PM

Intense and rippling imagery! Great read. I feel a tad bit flushed. ;)

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