| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Melinda Sordino on 08/21/03 at 04:03 PM this is outstanding. the words i have seem inadequate to describe my emotions, and so i will just say YES, this is how i feel... |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/22/03 at 05:36 PM Wonderfully presented images that really grab the rader's attention. The awkward sensation at the end really makes an impact. Great read. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 08/24/03 at 09:09 AM making love... that's right... you've hit it right on the proverbial head... i have to show this poem to my husband... it's right up our alley... excellent imagery... blessings... |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 08/25/03 at 03:24 AM I love the way you mixed the beauty and rawness of sex together in this extremely well written poem... |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 12/26/03 at 04:33 AM like molten stars falling on a panting desert............a gripping piece, filled with stellar passion, and interjected with a slice of humanity. wait a second! dionne warwick called. she wants her deja vu back! |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 12/30/03 at 03:48 AM WOW! |
| Posted by Richard Trotter on 01/12/04 at 01:49 AM sensually well written, great poem. |
| Posted by Anne Howe on 04/20/04 at 11:33 PM a beautiful poem! |
| Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 02/08/14 at 12:24 AM I really like how the juxtaposition of physical (gripping your ankles) and fantasy (molten stars falling on a panting desert). Also, it's just hot. |
