| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/22/03 at 10:39 PM Refreshing perspective. You've taken a series of snapshots, added your own perspective to them around a centralized theme, and created one of the finest verses I've seen. Great wordcraft. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/23/03 at 09:21 AM Outstanding beauty and lush wording. Really wonderful to read! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/26/03 at 04:32 AM Fine word snapshots....Charlie |
| Posted by Melanie A Bennett on 05/30/04 at 03:24 PM I feel like I am there... excellent piece! |
| Posted by Mike Loftis on 09/14/04 at 01:43 AM This is POETRY!! Excellent read. |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 11/19/04 at 07:14 AM Total excellence! |
| Posted by Paul Marino on 04/29/05 at 09:40 PM "you are the sunset of thirsty"...that's nice. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 10/03/06 at 06:11 AM most delightful read |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 03/14/07 at 08:51 AM This one speaks to me of longing.. deep romantic longing.. aloha to you and yours...;-) |
