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by Leslie Ann Eisenberg


Brilliant slashes of light
Wailing siren sliver of remorse
Divine dark words
Wish this kiss away

04/05/2003

Author's Note: Panned from a free write while driving in traffic in south san francisco, returning from my first writer's circle.

Posted on 08/19/2003
Copyright © 2025 Leslie Ann Eisenberg

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Don Coffman on 08/23/03 at 09:34 AM

A very curious image you've painted vividly. Short and to the point, this can be really intense and gives a lot of room for imagination to assign meanings.

Posted by Ann Krischus on 10/01/06 at 01:14 PM

i like the way the brevity contributes to the stark images in the poem.

Posted by Sam Roberts on 02/15/14 at 02:00 PM

Great imagery and alliteration :) congrats on POTD x

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