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DONE
by Leslie Ann Eisenberg
Brilliant slashes of light
Wailing siren sliver of remorse
Divine dark words
Wish this kiss away
04/05/2003
Author's Note: Panned from a free write while driving in traffic in south san francisco, returning from my first writer's circle.
Posted on 08/19/2003
Copyright © 2026 Leslie Ann Eisenberg
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/23/03 at 09:34 AM A very curious image you've painted vividly. Short and to the point, this can be really intense and gives a lot of room for imagination to assign meanings. |
| Posted by Ann Krischus on 10/01/06 at 01:14 PM i like the way the brevity contributes to the stark images in the poem. |
| Posted by Sam Roberts on 02/15/14 at 02:00 PM Great imagery and alliteration :) congrats on POTD x |
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