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Paper Cut

by Cole Miller



If only this pen was a blade
And this paper was my wrist
Because I'm bleeding to death
Through the words of this

08/10/2003

Posted on 08/11/2003
Copyright © 2024 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 08/11/03 at 01:36 PM

Oh girl, this is the most powerful 4 sentences combined I've ever read. Wonderful.

Posted by Holly H Dunne on 08/11/03 at 01:36 PM

wow! incredibly powerful. i think the length lends to the dramatic impact of this short but direct poem.

Posted by Amanda L Marron on 08/13/03 at 06:47 PM

i have to agree great use of such a short space

Posted by Mo Couts on 07/26/11 at 03:53 AM

Wow. This is powerful and to the point. Wonderfully done.

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