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by Olivia Weinkein

an ounce of you
is too much for me.
i like my tastes to come
in teaspoons and
time. not
allatonce.
overwhelming it is
and a glutton i become.
using you all up in one
swallow before i even
know what i have done.

08/07/2003

Posted on 08/07/2003
Copyright © 2025 Olivia Weinkein

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/07/03 at 09:26 PM

Quite appealing analogy. Well written. Do you mean allotment for allatonce? Or are you making up a word for the occasion?

Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/10/03 at 07:41 AM

Delicious and filled with wisdom. Great poem.

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