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Stormy Haiku
by Cathlyn CartierGently falling drops
making patterns in the dirt
promising rebirth.
Dark skies are forming
the sun overshadowed
the deluge begins!
Thunderclaps resound;
Windows rattle in their panes,
and the storm rages on.
The darkness lightens;
the sun, hidden no more.
The cycle is complete.
07/30/2003 Posted on 07/31/2003
Copyright © 2024 Cathlyn Cartier
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 07/31/03 at 12:32 AM lovely, very well expressed...the only thing that seems a little out of place is the exclamation mark...but that's just me...I love it... |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 08/01/03 at 01:49 AM Capturing the whole progression in a succint and vivid way. Nicely done. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 08/02/03 at 06:44 PM This is a beautiful renga, Cathlyn. Au naturel.
Peace... |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/05/03 at 04:52 AM Very good Cathie....Charlie |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 12/17/03 at 04:50 AM Three is my favorite. it's where the natural forces make themselves known on our human-made fortresses (rattling our windows) that we may most feel the might of nature |
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