| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 07/26/03 at 04:44 AM quite a scene you painted here. Excellent! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 07/26/03 at 02:02 PM I think I know her, I dated her sister from Alamogordo. Good stuff, my friend.
Peace... |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/26/03 at 03:57 PM You lucked out! LOL! The contradictory title is very clever (Angelic Barfly???) Congratulations on Top Ten! |
| Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 07/26/03 at 11:20 PM A lady would have tried to pull that foot out of his mouth ...*grins* great poem! |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 07/27/03 at 03:37 PM hahaha |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/27/03 at 07:55 PM Very intriguing title and the poem fits it like a glove.A different and refreshing poetry. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/28/03 at 06:30 PM Fun poem to read Max....Charlie |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 07/28/03 at 10:21 PM tales such as these happen *too* often to me. :) ROFL very nicely put! |
| Posted by Amanda J Cobb on 07/30/03 at 01:21 AM "An angel tinged in shadow." Wonderful line. The imagery in this is so vivid. Great work. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/24/03 at 07:41 AM The ending is quite amusingly done, and the rest is as vivid as a picture. I loved it. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/04/04 at 03:19 AM This is amazingly wonderful!!! LOL, it definitely made me laugh to imagine it! Thank you! |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/06/04 at 06:45 AM max, if i ever read a piece by you that i don't adore, i shall have MY feet kicking MY arse in disbelief... very cheeky poem here... i love it... blessings... |
