|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Anne Engelen on 07/26/03 at 04:44 AM|
quite a scene you painted here. Excellent!
|Posted by JD Clay on 07/26/03 at 02:02 PM|
I think I know her, I dated her sister from Alamogordo. Good stuff, my friend.
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/26/03 at 03:57 PM|
You lucked out! LOL! The contradictory title is very clever (Angelic Barfly???) Congratulations on Top Ten!
|Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 07/26/03 at 11:20 PM|
A lady would have tried to pull that foot out of his mouth ...*grins* great poem!
|Posted by Rommel Cruz on 07/27/03 at 03:37 PM|
|Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/27/03 at 07:55 PM|
Very intriguing title and the poem fits it like a glove.A different and refreshing poetry.
|Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/28/03 at 06:30 PM|
Fun poem to read Max....Charlie
|Posted by Rachelle Howe on 07/28/03 at 10:21 PM|
tales such as these happen *too* often to me. :) ROFL very nicely put!
|Posted by Amanda J Cobb on 07/30/03 at 01:21 AM|
"An angel tinged in shadow." Wonderful line. The imagery in this is so vivid. Great work.
|Posted by Don Coffman on 08/24/03 at 07:41 AM|
The ending is quite amusingly done, and the rest is as vivid as a picture. I loved it.
|Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/04/04 at 03:19 AM|
This is amazingly wonderful!!! LOL, it definitely made me laugh to imagine it! Thank you!
|Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/06/04 at 06:45 AM|
max, if i ever read a piece by you that i don't adore, i shall have MY feet kicking MY arse in disbelief... very cheeky poem here... i love it... blessings...