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by Lori I Wolfe

I see an image

A silhouette within the shadows

Tidal-waves devour the weak

As a ship set sail beyond reach

Caught between Earth and Sea

The undertow swallows the numb

Memories begin to fade

While the raft of hope

Drifts away into the sun

Falling deep where a lifeless

Abyss beacons a soul

Tubes of imitated veins

Fill with false promises

Undying hope awaits now

For Divine Intervention

07/24/2003

Posted on 07/24/2003
Copyright © 2022 Lori I Wolfe

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/25/03 at 05:38 AM

I ditto Arts comment Lori...Charlie

Posted by David R Spellman on 07/25/03 at 12:25 PM

Much feeling so strongly and vividly expressed here on a very emotional subject. Well done.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/26/03 at 11:34 PM

Tremendous imagery and a reminder that not everything is in our hands alone. Great read.

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