Regret by Max BouilletRegret is an
overheated minivan
in the middle of the desert
with the echo of
are we there yet
fading on the last
current of cool air. 07/14/2003 Posted on 07/15/2003 Copyright © 2024 Max Bouillet
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Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 07/15/03 at 03:18 AM this one i still need to think about |
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/17/03 at 05:57 PM So clever! I agree, I like this folder |
Posted by Don Coffman on 08/24/03 at 07:33 AM Certainly a very powerful example of regret. Another lil piece of cleverness (the good kind of cleverness, not that mediocre rating stuff ;) |
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/05/03 at 07:27 AM all i can think of is national lampoons vacation... sorry, i love that movie... great analogy... blessings :) |
Posted by E. A. Pugh on 12/22/10 at 07:40 PM So true. |
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