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Fingertip seasons

by Beth K Hannah

Winter:

Infinite you are
As you touch my wings
Spread your gossamer tidings
Weaving me a folk tale.


Spring:

I feel like a brand new prostitute
Out on her first night
Her first client eyes her up and down
And hands her the money.


Summer:

If I seldom see the truth
It is because I love you
And not because I exist for you.



Fall:

I catch you in my palms
My eyes light up like a waterfall
Even before you start to resist
I let you down again.




07/13/2003

Author's Note: My rough attempt at something other than my own self mutilating.
Dedicated to the emotion that twists.

Posted on 07/14/2003
Copyright © 2024 Beth K Hannah

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cymbre Dolphay on 07/14/03 at 05:58 AM

Like it muchly. The seasons are their own emotinal state...

Posted by Martini Koy on 07/14/03 at 08:37 AM

you've given each season life. they're almost like people. i like it.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/18/03 at 10:48 PM

Very earthy and exquisite... a great read. Thanks.

Posted by Don Coffman on 09/01/03 at 03:29 AM

A creative approach, well done. As said previously, the seasons (and the colors) do sort of outline the emotional states.

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