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The Bus Stop

by Mary Ellen Smith



Our breath is hot like the asphalt beneath our feet.

Strangers all, keeping at arms length
Furtive glances, polite smiles
Given and withdrawn like shadows.
The only shade out here.

Cars whizzing by stir up clouds of dust
We bat at them like we are waving to our best friends.
Cars and trucks
Hmmmm…a taxi would be nice.
Whizzzzz.
To the store
School
Work
Home
Play

Every once in awhile someone leans out
Looking for large looming buses on the horizon.
We all wait for the sound of air brakes hissing.

So hot.

One little girl with brown soft eyes looks at me.
My smile doesn’t shake her off.
She clings on with her dark pretty eyes like a hug.
“Where did you get those big brown eyes?” I ask.
She shrugs like she doesn’t have the answer to that.
Just then the bus lumbers up.
She twirls around, her skirt caught up in the heat of the exhaust.
All the way around like a ballerina in the desert.
She turns and replies with a smile,
“K Mart.”

07/11/2003

Posted on 07/11/2003
Copyright © 2025 Mary Ellen Smith

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 07/12/03 at 09:21 AM

lol...cute ending, children are always a delight. Nice delivery of an everyday scene.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/12/03 at 03:07 PM

Whimsical and observant of ordinary life. I am with Adrian, a cute ending! A bit of humor. A touch of pathos. A lot of heat! :)

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/14/03 at 03:57 AM

I bought a smile there once, but this one was free. Fun poem Mar....Charlie

Posted by JD Clay on 07/15/03 at 04:45 AM

Superb transition from heatwave to lemonade, ME. Your sweatingly bit of traumatic whimsy definately opens up the pores, while putting on the grin. Nice work. Peace...

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