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Sandcastle

by Mary Ellen Smith




at dusk the castle’s silhouette steals the last sweet beam of light.
illuminates the parapet and the last sea gull’s retreating flight.

high above in the castle keep, ocean breezes roar a tune.
a song well known in the deep, underneath a knowing moon.

her moat, alas floods and there, in her halls no echo's made.
no armored knight or maiden fair resides there in the ocean’s shade.

honeycomb hues of daylight’s last beg the foaming tides to swell.
summer blues and greens are cast over shore and sand and pearled shell.

unfortified, she fights till death. until the sea reclaims its own.
the castle melts in one last breath leaving one more king without a throne.

07/09/2003

Posted on 07/10/2003
Copyright © 2024 Mary Ellen Smith

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/11/03 at 01:23 PM

Ahhh a beach comber's dream! :)

Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 07/12/03 at 09:18 AM

A very creative poem. I thouroughly enjoyed this piece. A deeper meaning underlying...all that comes from the earth shall one day be reclaimed by the earth.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/14/03 at 04:02 AM

Felt I was there. Fun day at the beach...Charlie

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