Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/10/03 at 08:20 AM I like the rhyme scheme you used a lot :) |
Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/11/03 at 06:28 PM WOW what a beautiful way of conveying the message poetically.Wonderful! |
Posted by Charles J Hannan on 07/12/03 at 04:55 AM Nicely done Thomas..A sadness I'm familiar with indeed. |
Posted by Don Coffman on 08/26/03 at 09:46 AM A sweet smelling flower, for sure. Beautiful job. :) |