|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/10/03 at 08:20 AM|
I like the rhyme scheme you used a lot :)
|Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/11/03 at 06:28 PM|
WOW what a beautiful way of conveying the message poetically.Wonderful!
|Posted by Charles J Hannan on 07/12/03 at 04:55 AM|
Nicely done Thomas..A sadness I'm familiar with indeed.
|Posted by Don Coffman on 08/26/03 at 09:46 AM|
A sweet smelling flower, for sure. Beautiful job. :)