pathetic.org :: a new day beckons by Michele Schottelkorb

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a new day beckons

Peer into your hidden soul

And find what lies within

Give a second and take a chance

A world, I swear, youll win

This moment, shining, in the light

Beckons your presence here

Look inside; find the truth

Listen, for a moment, my dear

A new day beckons to your heart

Grasp it and hold on tight

Chances like this are one in a million

You have been rescued from your plight

Love is here; light appears

Take it, my eternal friend

No more worry; no more fright

Your pain is at its end

07/07/2003

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/08/03 at 04:57 PM

Beautiful promises of the glories of love. Great wordcraft.

Posted by David R Spellman on 07/09/03 at 12:49 PM

A very hopeful piece; well crafted.

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/10/03 at 07:16 AM

Your rhythm is excellent, especially in the first two stanzas!

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