| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 07/07/03 at 02:15 PM Great descriptions - very vivid. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/07/03 at 08:59 PM Beautiful and wet. Very wet imagery. I love the poem and the scene depiction is great. Thanks for posting. |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 07/08/03 at 02:28 AM Images of a great bird of prey swooping down on the serpentine river...very evocative! |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/28/03 at 01:51 AM Well Stephanie this is a wonderful way to look at the positives thru the eyes of the negative.Your poems are really refreshing,melodious and with great imagery.I will be back for more. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 09/12/03 at 03:48 AM you have a wonderful way of maniuplating words to really capture of nature... |
| Posted by Leah Laiben on 12/05/03 at 03:48 PM This is very vivid and clear. I enjoyed every word. |
