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Superimposed Worry Release

by Amanda L Marron

music echoes through my head

as i bang it to the beat

my voice screams the words

that i know by heart

back at the lyricist

belting out the notes on stage

tears surge out my eyes

forming twin-rivers down my cheeks

your utterance hitting my soul

releasing all the constant worry

superimposed inside

07/05/2003

Author's Note: concerts are a significant part of my life. they are a big release for me, a stress relief.

Posted on 07/06/2003
Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Richard Paez on 09/08/04 at 09:36 PM

This is a great expression of what it is like to be pressed up against those metal bars at a concert; reminds me of how I felt at my first Tool show and my second Metallica show. The only thing missing from here is the crackling in my ears. This is what live music is all about and you caught it on paper--great job!

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