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Creation (Haiku)

by Graeme Fielden

Poetry bleeding
White paper. Red therapy
Numb my blood teared eyes

07/01/2003

Posted on 07/01/2003
Copyright © 2024 Graeme Fielden

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/01/03 at 04:07 PM

Really powerful one. Love the meshing of art and therapy... great read.

Posted by Alex Smyth on 07/03/03 at 03:51 AM

Interesting take on the sometimes agony of it...

Posted by Anne Engelen on 07/09/03 at 03:18 PM

One of the best haiku I ever read. Superb!!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/12/03 at 12:29 AM

Purest poetry posited; Passionate pain's perfecting; Personal pilgramage; Penned power!

Posted by Don Coffman on 08/21/03 at 02:41 AM

Very nifty! That's a really potent image.

Posted by JD Clay on 12/19/03 at 03:27 AM

Crafty, this cruel and calculating muse of yours Graeme. Effective nonetheless. Pe4ce...

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 04/19/04 at 05:30 AM

ah, ode to the poet... i love your haiku poems... they are not traditional, which makes them perfect for me... blessings...

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