| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 07/02/03 at 06:14 PM continuing to amaze me. this is most wonderful. |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 07/20/03 at 07:02 PM Hmmmm, I'll have to study oh this one for a while, intriguing! |
| Posted by Amanda J Cobb on 07/30/03 at 01:24 AM Oh, I like this. Love the sense of free-falling freedom the 2nd verse implies, even though the known end is inevitable. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/14/03 at 08:38 AM This 'dictionary' is incredible. Amazing thoughts presented here. I feel about as creative as a brick in comparison. |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 09/09/03 at 05:02 PM these are pricless, max. i love your mind.... |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 10/02/03 at 12:54 PM Wow, how simplistically presented in this analogy yet so deeply goes the explanation; a never-ending cycle of realization of fate. DEEP!! |
| Posted by Richard Paez on 11/01/03 at 03:32 PM This reminds me of The Matrix! The Matrix is the bucket leaking into itself, the droplets in freefall are those who have escaped The Matrix, who return to free the rest of the droplets. This is philosophica humana expressed in poetry. Great thinking, great writing, and great thanks for sharing this with us, Max. (Or should I call you Morpheus now?) {m} |
