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Three Haiku

by Bruce W Niedt

I.

The autumn morning

domes us in such a blue –

the inside of a bell.

 

II.

I walk back from you –

the path I take surrounded

with yellow flowers.

 

III.

The little fruitfly

is a tiny satellite –

the peach is his world.

 

[1971]

 

06/25/2003

Posted on 06/26/2003
Copyright © 2024 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Agnes Eva on 06/27/03 at 04:34 AM

heehee, I. made me feel like a fairy.. III. made me feel like a giant..er, human appreciating and focusing in on microcosm. II. was a less unique impression (the glow of a face mirrored in brightest nature) maybe because yellow (smiley face?) and happy have too long been metaphoric. a nice trilogy all in all

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