strange existance by Kalikala Smith open you eyes and feel the breeze rumble, ripple, ride, across the endless sky to the other side. 06/24/2003 Author's Note: umm, i'm very stuck here... Posted on 06/24/2003 Copyright © 2025 Kalikala Smith Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/24/03 at 04:12 PM I don't see how you're stuck with all the motion you have in third line.... great use of alliteration. Wonderful poem. Posted by John Harder on 06/24/03 at 06:54 PM good desriptions here. nice work. Posted by Christel Crews on 09/14/03 at 02:49 AM sometimes, i get stuck on a piece and it ends up as a short one, and strangely enough, people like them! hehehe... i loved this piece! Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2025 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)