| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Barbara Griffith on 06/23/03 at 02:47 AM I'm not sure if it was the intent, but what I got from this was that it was something you were disapointed by. I like the short, to-the-point manner of this poem. |
| Posted by John Ilotan on 06/24/03 at 01:23 PM Interesting analogy, Max. I'm thinking, more like a slow drive through the country in that BMW. Then punchin through the gears and opening her up on the highway for the ride home. |
| Posted by Cole Miller on 06/26/03 at 05:07 AM this paints an amazing picture, even though i detest the color pink it truly suits the situation. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/24/03 at 07:31 AM It certainly can be at times . . . |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 11/13/03 at 07:47 PM Interesting analogy, sex too soon can ruin a good thing. Nice little poem |
| Posted by Bethany Lee on 12/21/03 at 04:42 PM wow...never looked at sex in that light before...*s* |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 09/08/08 at 11:51 PM This is so hot! Love the images, fabulous! |
