Faith by Max BouilletFaith is a misplaced
forget-me-not
in the pocket
of a confused angel
begging for change
in front of the pharmacy
where a woman was raped
and a kid was shot. 06/22/2003 Posted on 06/23/2003 Copyright © 2024 Max Bouillet
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Posted by Amanda J Cobb on 06/23/03 at 07:44 PM You called one of my poems cynical and I'm returning the description. Never having been a very faith-oriented person to begin with, I can agree with this all too easily, much as that saddens me. Well written. |
Posted by John Ilotan on 06/24/03 at 01:26 PM Excellent write. Such fantastic and vivid imagery,
this is a poem that leaves you thinking.Great work. |
Posted by David R Spellman on 07/12/03 at 01:31 AM This speaks volumes about today's society in more ways than one. Expertly crafted. |
Posted by Alex Smyth on 07/20/03 at 06:59 PM A provoking read on this Sunday afternoon... |
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