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choking on saliva

by Olivia Weinkein

nothing would save me now
i got lost
inside of my head inside
of you
have wrapped a blanket of
pornography around me
it shreds everything to pieces
us and i wasn't supposed
to be able to run
fast
enough
of
this.
my arms and legs hurt from
where i've been and you don't
help matters much with
the way you continue to
peel
them back
again.

06/20/2003

Posted on 06/21/2003
Copyright © 2024 Olivia Weinkein

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/23/03 at 02:39 PM

Painfully vivid and emotionally charged. Great work.

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 06/24/03 at 10:08 PM

this is wonderful. i like the sadness

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