| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 06/19/03 at 06:56 PM that is beautiful |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 06/19/03 at 09:18 PM WOW...pretty powerful combination you have there! Just wonderful! |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 06/22/03 at 05:04 PM I love the imagry of fire and earth as living beings. Perhaps because they are alive. Beautiful poetry indeed. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/23/03 at 12:40 PM Left me gasping for breath. Great wordcrafting. |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/21/03 at 08:26 PM What a wonderful piece of poem!Great lines,Great write. |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/21/03 at 08:27 PM Also, Congrats on POTD. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 07/22/03 at 01:48 PM I love a good love poem and yours is a fine example as Poem of the Day. Congratulation, Karl.
Peace... |
| Posted by Teri T Lahmon on 07/22/03 at 04:00 PM I love the imagery and the way in which the line breaks framed the images of the poem. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/23/03 at 01:19 AM I guess a flood would ooze if the levee were a strong one! Bold, striking analogy carried throughout with a very happy ending! :) Congratulations on POTD. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/31/03 at 08:30 AM brilliant form... your words intensify the effect... blessings... |
