|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Alastre Zidler on 06/11/03 at 05:27 PM|
This one took me by surprise! A great creative addition to your MOMENT series, Graeme. Interesting way to personify a candle as a martyr... bravo!
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/13/03 at 06:09 PM|
The shape of the poem gives a vibrance to the poem which IS a little melancholy. The imagery is sharp and clear. Multiple meanings.
|Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 03/26/04 at 02:34 AM|
light a wick upon the alter of life... hmm... being a pagan, i really loved this form, style and finishing line... right up my alley... what a beautiful candle holder you have built... embodying the physical AND the emotional... blessings...
|Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 09/07/04 at 06:16 PM|
Thank you for letting your light shine here. Quite creative and enjoyable.
|Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/04/05 at 05:46 PM|
Tremendous form that accentuates an amazing verse. Great read with formidable structure. :)
|Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/25/09 at 12:25 PM|
Exremely creative! Your choice of colors enhance the words. I have been reading this seies in bits and pieces and lovin' it. This is the best one yet
|Posted by Maria Massarella on 05/25/09 at 05:46 PM|
You have depicted a beautiful Moment 8 and my spirit adores that it be of love and light...So bright a-flame in PPS skies today. Grazie*Thank you ... m.a