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MOMENT 8

by Graeme Fielden

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::::::::: hums & whispers ::::::::::
::::::::::: c o n t e n t e d l y :::::::
::::::::::: u p o n  l o n e l y ::::::::::
:::::::::::: sacrificial altars :::::::::::::
::::::::: knowing  she can die :::::::
::::::::::::: for greater good :::::::::::::
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::: GODS OF LOVE ‘N LIGHT :::
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06/11/2003

Posted on 06/11/2003
Copyright © 2022 Graeme Fielden

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alastre Zidler on 06/11/03 at 05:27 PM

This one took me by surprise! A great creative addition to your MOMENT series, Graeme. Interesting way to personify a candle as a martyr... bravo!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/13/03 at 06:09 PM

The shape of the poem gives a vibrance to the poem which IS a little melancholy. The imagery is sharp and clear. Multiple meanings.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 03/26/04 at 02:34 AM

light a wick upon the alter of life... hmm... being a pagan, i really loved this form, style and finishing line... right up my alley... what a beautiful candle holder you have built... embodying the physical AND the emotional... blessings...

Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 09/07/04 at 06:16 PM

Thank you for letting your light shine here. Quite creative and enjoyable.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/04/05 at 05:46 PM

Tremendous form that accentuates an amazing verse. Great read with formidable structure. :)

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/25/09 at 12:25 PM

Exremely creative! Your choice of colors enhance the words. I have been reading this seies in bits and pieces and lovin' it. This is the best one yet

Posted by Maria Massarella on 05/25/09 at 05:46 PM

You have depicted a beautiful Moment 8 and my spirit adores that it be of love and light...So bright a-flame in PPS skies today. Grazie*Thank you ... m.a

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