| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alastre Zidler on 06/11/03 at 05:27 PM This one took me by surprise! A great creative addition to your MOMENT series, Graeme. Interesting way to personify a candle as a martyr... bravo! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/13/03 at 06:09 PM The shape of the poem gives a vibrance to the poem which IS a little melancholy. The imagery is sharp and clear. Multiple meanings. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 03/26/04 at 02:34 AM light a wick upon the alter of life... hmm... being a pagan, i really loved this form, style and finishing line... right up my alley... what a beautiful candle holder you have built... embodying the physical AND the emotional... blessings... |
| Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 09/07/04 at 06:16 PM Thank you for letting your light shine here. Quite creative and enjoyable. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/04/05 at 05:46 PM Tremendous form that accentuates an amazing verse. Great read with formidable structure. :) |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/25/09 at 12:25 PM Exremely creative! Your choice of colors enhance the words. I have been reading this seies in bits and pieces and lovin' it. This is the best one yet |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 05/25/09 at 05:46 PM You have depicted a beautiful Moment 8 and my spirit adores that it be of love and light...So bright a-flame in PPS skies today. Grazie*Thank you ... m.a |
