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A LittleToo Far Gone
by Charles J HannanDriving toward lights
Not really seeing
Curves become strait lines
Unfolding like memories
Tires desperately trying
To
Hold
The
Road
Why
Don't I just let go
Free my......self
Painful torment
I put my wipers on
For rain/tears
Soaked in misery
Searching for something
Fueled by
A love I can never have
Teenageless
Time forgot
Father forgive me
Wherever you are
For not becoming
Responsible
For this retreat
For letting go
And falling
05/25/2003 Posted on 05/25/2003
Copyright © 2024 Charles J Hannan
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 05/25/03 at 05:00 PM it is a beautiful scene but heart breaking...the i can hear the rain beating. wonderful job |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/25/03 at 08:06 PM Tragic consequences of misplaced love. All too often seen in our culture today. You write sparingly and forcefully. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/25/03 at 11:21 PM Awww charles...hauntingly sad...but very well written |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/28/03 at 09:45 AM how sad. |
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