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Solar tears

The sun cries for me
And I burn
To cinders,
To ashes
That blow away softly
In summers
Hot breath

05/18/2003

Posted on 05/18/2003
Copyright © 2026 John Ilotan

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Christina Bruno on 05/20/03 at 05:22 AM

beautiful work!!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/23/03 at 03:52 AM

Imaginative. But well, the imagination needs keen observation too. And let the meaning come to you.

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 06/01/03 at 07:03 PM

i agree w/ everyone, and i just LOVE The title

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