| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 05/20/03 at 05:22 AM beautiful work!! |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/21/03 at 02:20 PM i'm fascinated by this. something so beautiful can be so "destructive" |
| Posted by Sarah Brookes on 05/21/03 at 06:58 PM Such an intensity. It simply burns through the few words you've used. Excellent work, exquisite images. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/22/03 at 04:51 AM i like this quick flash of imagery, it makes me think of the transientness of human life, as though watching through a fast motion nature camera from the Sun's perspective |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/23/03 at 03:52 AM Imaginative. But well, the imagination needs keen observation too. And let the meaning come to you. |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 06/01/03 at 07:03 PM i agree w/ everyone, and i just LOVE The title |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 06/17/03 at 06:37 AM John,this is excellent. |
