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Hardcore

by Amanda J Cobb

I watched you run
in circles at the concert,
dizzying yourself up in time
to your daddy's music.
Around and around
ran your little feet,
clad in miniature white sneakers,
until a stray stranger's foot
caught the tip of yours
and you went crashing down
to the rugged pavement -
knee, then elbow, then head.

If humans left skidmarks,
you would have.

And yet, there was no crying,
no trembling of lip
or doctoring of hurts.
You were simply stunned a moment,
then pushed your 18-month-old self up,
giving your worried and frazzled mom
a huge grin,
and began again to run in circles,
face lit up happily and arms,
if scraped, still in the air.

05/12/2003

Author's Note: Dedicated to the youngest child of the lead singer of Anonymous Bosch, and to all other hardcore kids out there.

Posted on 05/12/2003
Copyright © 2024 Amanda J Cobb

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/08/03 at 06:08 PM

Those trembling lips are heart wrenching to watch on toddlers... very lush details of a great scene.

Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/15/08 at 06:26 PM

yeah, that's a kid destined for success!

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