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Her Wish

by Quinlan L Gibson

New penny painted
fintertips and toes
Sunset hair cascades
framing eyes
of steel blue and sea.
Deliciously tan.
Dress that pulls
the tides in
for a closer look.
Glide me through
the weary sand,
my mark on this Earth
momentus.
If only
minute.

05/07/2003

Author's Note: Myrtle Beach daydreaming...

Posted on 05/08/2003
Copyright © 2024 Quinlan L Gibson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/08/03 at 03:27 PM

It promises to be a great vacation!

Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 05/08/03 at 06:31 PM

Delicate words and vivid imagery! Loved the flow of this one!

Posted by David R Spellman on 05/08/03 at 06:32 PM

Evocative and tantalizing!

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 08/30/05 at 03:16 AM

Wonderful images, and I liked the use of colors in the beginning :)

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