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MOMENT 6

by Graeme Fielden

lamplit moment.

ndhazylikememoriesthe

stonecoldpizzaandcrisp

now

R.I.P. R.I.P. R.I.P.

restinpeacerestinpeace

inpeacerestinpeacerestinpeace

restinpeacerestinpeacerestinpeace

05/06/2003

Posted on 05/06/2003
Copyright © 2024 Graeme Fielden

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/07/03 at 05:32 PM

As usual very subtle.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/09/03 at 11:26 AM

inviting to the mind

Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/12/03 at 03:28 PM

The imagery really spoke to me on this one. Excellent craftmanship.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 03/25/04 at 10:10 AM

ok, go with me on this... but i see the form of the poem as a headstone... and the chardonnay represents blood, and the stone cold pizza is a corpse... i do not know why... i know, i'm twisted, but then again, i have been reading your scorpion series, so can you blame me?... very creative *grin*... blessings...

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