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you pull out too soon

by Olivia Weinkein

it weighs heavily on the shoulders
the way i can be unbuttoned.
undone. the way you pull out at
the last minute. the way i can
never pull myself back together.

05/02/2003

Posted on 05/03/2003
Copyright © 2026 Olivia Weinkein

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 06/22/03 at 10:47 PM

i can not beieve that no one has commented on this ... i love it!

Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/30/03 at 04:35 PM

Suggestive imagery that pulls at the heart strings of anyone that has been in love. Fantastic work.

Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/05/04 at 06:40 PM

ouch. this aches.

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